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Natalie
Natalie

The Neighbor in the Storm

A violent summer storm isolates our country house, bringing a drenched neighbor, a power outage, and an attraction that refuses to end with the rain.

Cut Off by the Rain

A heavy summer downpour droned against the windows, turning the evening into a sealed capsule with the outside world shut out of it. On days like that our country house felt especially remote. We weren’t expecting anyone, we had nowhere to be, and we were spending the hours lazily, just the two of us.

Natalie sat in the wide dormer window upstairs with her legs folded under her. She was wearing nothing but an old flannel shirt of mine, big check pattern, soft and faded, smelling of detergent and my cologne. The size difference meant the collar slid off one shoulder and left her collarbone bare, and the hem barely covered her thighs.

She was reading, looking up now and then to listen to the thunder. There was absolutely nothing on under the shirt, and in the dim gray storm light I could see the shape of her breasts clearly through the loose weave.

Then, from the terrace below, came an insistent muffled knocking at the glass door.

We looked at each other. Anyone turning up on our property in weather like that was strange. I went down and found a neighbor from further along the road — Dennis. We barely knew each other; we’d crossed paths only at the occasional residents’ meeting. He was an architect, a somewhat closed-off, quiet man of about thirty-five, with the hard hands of someone who does most of the work on his own half-finished house himself.

Right now he was standing on the doorstep soaked to the skin. His heavy jacket had gone dark with water and his wet hair was dripping onto the decking. He had a heavy toolbox in one hand.

“Sorry,” Dennis said in his low, level voice, stepping inside. “Lightning took out my whole panel — shorted the wiring, flooded half the place. I worked out I’m not fixing it without the schematic and a decent tester, and the signal’s down. You’re the closest. Can I borrow your internet, if it’s still up? Or at least wait out the worst of it.”

“Of course, come in.” I brought him a dry towel. “The cable’s holding for now.”

Natalie came down the wooden stairs, drawn by the voices. Seeing a strange man, she stopped for a second on the steps and instinctively pulled the hem of the flannel shirt down. Dennis raised his head, and his direct, heavy look fixed on her outline. There was a sharp one-second pause in which her domestic near-nakedness and his rough, rain-soaked bulk hung against each other. She colored slightly — but she didn’t retreat upstairs. She said hello, politely.

What the Candles Changed

We set up in the study. Dennis took off the wet jacket and stayed in a heavy gray T-shirt that pulled across his shoulders. While he compared schematics on my monitor, Natalie brought us hot tea. Handing him the cup, her hand shook very slightly. Dennis caught the saucer, and their fingers touched — his palm hot and rough, hers cool. That brief contact made her chest rise a little faster under the loose shirt.

The storm outside only strengthened. The lights in the house flickered twice in warning and then went out entirely. The room dropped into a thick blue darkness broken only by the occasional flash.

“Well, that’s that,” Dennis said quietly out of the dark. “Now you’re becalmed too.”

I lit several heavy candles from the mantelpiece. The warm unsteady flames instantly changed the geometry of the room, throwing long shadows. In that intimate half-light the flannel shirt looked almost transparent. Natalie sat on the edge of the leather sofa and drew her knees up to her chest. The shirt pulled tight and left her smooth, rounded thighs completely bare.

Dennis did not look away from her. There was no insolence in it — it was a focused, deep male attention. He rose slowly from his chair and came to stand directly in front of her. His presence — a big man smelling of rain and leather — filled the whole space.

“Aren’t you cold?” he asked quietly, looking down at the gap between her thighs.

“No…” she answered, barely audible, held by how close he was. Her fingers clenched on the edge of the sofa.

Dennis lowered himself slowly onto one knee in front of her. His hand — large, corded with veins — settled on the wooden armrest a centimeter from her thigh. I stayed where I was by the fireplace, watching the distance between two completely different people melt at speed. My own breath caught at how natural and how forbidden the moment looked at the same time.

He reached out and took her chin carefully, making her lift her head. Natalie inhaled hard through her nose and her lips came apart. He didn’t kiss her right away. Instead his other hand slid up over her knee and under the soft flannel. The architect’s rough fingers travelled slowly, with real pressure, up the tender skin of her inner thighs, and her knees came further open under that pressure without her deciding it.

She turned her head toward me, and in the shifting candlelight I saw her eyes go dark and unfocused. She was looking for my reaction, and my stillness — my fixed stare — was the confirmation she wanted. The game had started.

Under My Own Shirt

Dennis unfastened the three lower buttons of my shirt on her body. The fabric fell open and her full, rounded breasts, nipples large and already tight, came completely into his view. The contrast between the coarse check flannel and the blinding white of her skin was extraordinary.

He exhaled roughly and his palms settled on her, filling with the soft heavy weight of them. He began to work her breasts, insistent and unhurried, making them shift and settle under his hands. Natalie arched sweetly, dropping her head back against the leather, and the first full, long sound came out of her and dissolved under the noise of the storm.

He caressed her without hurry. His thumbs traced firm circles around her nipples until they went hard as stone. Under those strong, certain hands her skin came up in faint gooseflesh. Without breaking off, he leaned down and put his mouth to her throat, then drew her into a deep, slow kiss. A muffled full sigh came up out of her. She pushed her fingers into his damp hair and pulled him closer, giving herself over to it completely. My shirt slid off her shoulders altogether and hung from her elbows, framing the absolute white of her bare torso in the moving candlelight.

I stepped forward and sat on the edge of the low table opposite the sofa. The arousal warming me from the inside was dense and physical. Natalie opened her eyes for a second, caught my stare fixed on her, and what came up in her pupils was a wild, vicious pleasure at the fact that her private fall was happening right here, under my full control.

Dennis pulled back from her mouth. His breathing had gone heavy. Without a word he stood, unbuckled his belt in one fast precise movement and pushed his jeans down along with everything under them. He came free thick and full, pulsing with the blood in him, the heavy flesh gleaming matte in the dim study — his contained arousal, finally not contained. Natalie stayed sitting on the sofa with her knees apart and moved her eyes down to him. Her chest rose high and uneven.

The Storm at Its Worst

Dennis took her by the hips, turned her smoothly with her back to him and set her on her knees on the leather seat, facing me. She arched her lower back and braced her palms against the cushions. In that position her rounded backside came up high and put her wet, heat-radiating sex fully on display. Her bare breasts hung and swayed with her quickening breath.

He moved in behind her. His strong hands settled on her waist and held her in place. He pressed the thick head of himself against her and entered her in one certain, devastatingly deep stroke, all the way.

“Ooohh—”

Her voice broke into a long, full sound that rolled around the room under the hiss of the rain.

That stroke sent her freed breasts swinging in a hard rhythm. His size made her clench convulsively around him, taking him to her absolute limit. Dennis growled low at how tight she was and set a dense, measured, deep pace immediately.

“Love — look — how deep he’s in—” she breathed roughly, looking straight into my eyes. In her unfocused stare there was shock at the size of him and something like pure delight. “It feels so good — god, Dennis, more—”

The architect picked up speed. The room filled with the full wet impact of their bodies and his ragged breathing. In time with each of his solid movements her perfect breasts swayed without stopping, and that primitive, wild image was driving me out of my mind. Natalie dissolved into the rhythm: she pushed her hips back to meet every stroke, dragging air in through her teeth, going off into loud, ecstatic sounds under my admiring stare.

Dennis moved with power and drive, entirely in control of the tempo. The lightning outside kept snatching their joined bodies out of the dark. Feeling himself close to finishing, he slowed sharply. He withdrew carefully, wet and sliding, and pulled a sound of disappointment out of her. Giving her no time to recover, he took her by the shoulders and drew her up, gently but without argument, turning her and bringing her down onto her knees on the rug directly in front of him.

His heavy, engorged length hung pulsing a few centimeters from her face. Natalie raised eyes to him gone dim with adrenaline, moving her look from Dennis to me and back. The sight of her full bare breasts shifting with her fast breathing brought the arousal in that room to its peak.

“Take it,” Dennis ordered hoarsely, his voice shaking with what he was holding in.

She leaned forward obediently. Her fingers closed around the hot flesh at the base and she opened her mouth slowly, taking the thick head inside. A full wet sound came up out of her throat. She began to work him slowly and deeply, swallowing him down centimeter by centimeter. Dennis pushed his fingers into her hair, holding her head still and helping himself with short exact movements.

I went down onto one knee beside them, transfixed.

The end came fast. Dennis drove in a few deep, sharp strokes, his body pulled taut as wire, and he growled low and long. In that moment he emptied himself into her mouth in powerful hot pulses, filling it with a crushingly abundant, thick load.

Natalie went still, her eyelids squeezed shut, her throat working through several slow, obedient swallows. A few drops of white escaped at the corner of her lips and rolled slowly down her chin onto her bare breasts. Dennis, breathing hard and fast, pulled back carefully and dropped onto the sofa with his head against the back of it.

Natalie stayed on her knees, her thighs still trembling finely with what she’d been through. She turned her face to me, licking the last of it from her lips, and in her huge eyes, shining in the dark, was the absolute vicious triumph of our private game.

After the Rain Stopped

That night of the storm changed the ordinary rhythm of our life completely, turning Dennis’s accidental visit into the start of a new, permanent chapter. The pull that had caught between him and my wife didn’t go out when the rain did — it took root, and it made the neighbor a fixed part of our closed world.

Dennis became her regular lover. Their meetings lost the initial awkwardness but kept the same sharp charge. Sometimes he came without warning, toward evening, when the light outside was already going. On those days it happened fast and on impulse — in the hallway, or on the wide kitchen table. Natalie would hear his step on the terrace and transform: her breathing would quicken and the familiar heat would come up in her eyes. Dennis, still as quiet and as certain as ever, took her with authority, like something owed to him, filling her with his heavy flesh while his strong hands closed over her swaying breasts. I watched from the far side of the room more often than not, taking in every full sound my wife made and the readiness with which she gave herself to his hard, deep rhythm.

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